This has got to be one of the biggest “newbie” mistakes small business owners make. When you start a business at some point you will very likely create a brochure or a website or a flyer that will be designed to sell your product or service. When that time comes you will have to very quickly learn how to write compelling sales copy and this is where the mistake occurs.
As Perry Marshall in his free e-course about writing an effective whitepaper says:
Why is it better to offer problem-solving information than a straight sales pitch?
Because: Nobody who bought a drill wanted a drill.
They wanted a hole.Therefore, if you sell drills, you should advertise information about making holes, not about drills!
I love this example. It sums up perfectly the principle about selling solutions to problems, providing a scratch to an itch and focusing on how your product or service can help *other* people.
So many new business owners will write sales materials thinking too much within their business using thoughts from their own head. It makes sense for a new business owner to do this because they are so immersed in what they do, they want to tell everyone about it from the view of the business. The problem is every tom, dick and joe out there feels the same about what they do and their business, so from a customer’s point of view there is very little differentiation. I don’t know about you but I prefer to have an edge over the competition.
The key is to think about the solutions and benefits your product provides and make sure they are prominent in every sales pitch you make. If you are a physical trainer you sell big muscles and improved fitness. If you are an events manager you sell good times and unique once in a lifetime experience. If your sell sports cars you sell luxury, envy and power.
My first online business was about proofreading essays for university students (www.BetterEdit.com). I could have stated how amazing our editors are, how much experience they have, where they studied and what qualifications they have, but that would not have been as effective as selling better grades. Students want a proofreader so they can get better results at school. I do include details about editor qualifications on my website but I don’t lead with that as the main sales pitch. The pitch is all about the benefit to the customer, not how amazing the product is.
Next time you write sales copy for your business make sure you are thinking how you benefit your customers and lead with the solution to the problem as your main sales angle.





